So, I decided on the end of the introduction! I will have the woman talking to her friend about her love life! I picked this because the dialogue and suspense just sounded better overall.
Here’s the second part (with shots and stuff again)!:
-Mid shot- two women legs and feet walking (one new character and the one seen before)
-Mid shots- no faces revealed yet, they sit down and camera goes up
-Mid shot- one asks the other “so how was the date last night”
-Over the shoulder- responds “the dinner was excellent! But I'm not sure about the guy..”
-Over the shoulder- other responds “Again? Ugh I hope you find a husband soon.. It’s getting late and you’re so picky..!”
-Mid shot- “Oh I know, Patricia.. But I just haven't found the one (upset but after saying “the one” starts smiling widely and creepily again kinda in relief)
END. HURRAH!
(cover of movie will be her smiling widely lowkey creepy w a little drop of blood on her face)
I’m SO excited to film this, but it will DEFINITELY be a challenge.. I’m up for a challenge;)!
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