Saturday, February 24, 2024

Part 1 of Writing a Horrendous Story

 I’ve been working on this for like an hour (maybe more) and I'm still not done. I still need to pick more details, but I am advancing in the planning of my film. I also need to work out stuff, such as where I’ll get a drone from or how I’ll get stuff happening. 

I want to make it a discreet horror/thriller.. Kinda like a surprise or secret.. :)! 

Here is the start of my film and what shots I’m planning on using!:


(music starts and shots start to fade in from black)

-Settings shots (2-3)- suburban houses and city (drone, the drone moves and takes houses and stuff and then in one it goes down)

-Setting shot- house

-Close ups and mid shots- objects (the pretty setting of the table indicating it is a romantic lunch, such as flowers, and the pretty plates and stuff)

-Midshot- heels and lower leg walking (camera follows)

-Close up- turning on the stove

-Close ups and mid shots- woman cooking, not reveal face yet

(noises of her cutting veggies and cooking are overlapped w music, which is soft)

-Mid shot- putting it on a tray and making it pretty (all of this^^ in nice, sweet, innocent lightning.. maybe a lil shade of pink BUT very small and discreet)

-Mid shot- her walking w the tray

-Shoulder shot- her serving it, not revealing the “date”

-High angle Mid shot- right at her saying “ok honey, food’s ready, time to eat” and very creepy wide smile and spoon w food up

-Low angle Mid shot/close up- man strapped down bleeding and rejecting

-High Mid shot- right at her again, but smile fades and she puts the spoon into camera (like close, not into)

-Long mid shot- her trying to feed the man

-Mid shot/close up- man refuses

-Mid shot- right at her, smile completely faded, puts spoon down, mad angry furious

-Mid Close up- takes long knife out of back

-Long mid shot- stabbing him

(screen goes black and loud male loud scream, title “The One” appears very bubbly but turns bloody.. Then a clock ticking is heard but not seen)

-Mid shot- clock ticking


I’m still figuring out what should happen afterwards. I am not sure if I want the character to be working in an office and picking her next target, or talking to a friend about her love life. This is going to be a hard film, but I will try my best! I have a vision..


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